Thread:Mikecoo/@comment-29656634-20180202100003

Hi, you undid my revisions on these two pages but gave no reason.

The current information on the Islands (location) page is unstructured and poorly written, so I improved the grammar and moved some stuff into a more structured section. Was the creation of a new section the incorrect thing to do here? Would it be better if I just corrected the grammar in the introduction without restructuring anything?

As for the Adventure Time (comic) page, the information in the first two sections was clearly written at the inception of the comic series and is now completely outdated. Ryan North is no longer the lead writer. TBH that whole page is a mess at the moment and should probably be split up eventually.

Thanks for your consideration 