Forum:Remember me fanfic

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My epic frien made this fanfic. Not done, but give me ideas in comments!

Remember Me

(The episode begins with a shot of a hand knocking on a door. FINN opens the door and recognizes MARCELINE.)

MARCELINE:    I need to tell you something.

                 (Cuts to inside the Tree House where MARCELINE is telling FINN about her friendship with SIMON after the Great Mushroom War.)

MARCELINE: (tearfully) He doesn’t remember me. All I want is to save him, to bring him back. I wish he had never found that stupid crown!

FINN: But it kept him alive-

MARCELINE: (yelling) But was it worth it for him to live, never remembering who he was? (sighs) He was on our side, Finn. That crown ruined him.

FINN: Did he put you up to this? Did he possess you? Are you wearing a wire, Marcy? (screaming in MARCELINE’S face) ICE KING! YOU SMELL LIKE LUMPY BUNCAKES!

MARCELINE: (obviously upset that FINN won’t take her seriously) Ugh! I thought you were a hero! I thought you could help me! (quietly)   I thought you could save him.

                 (She storms out of the house and flies away.)

FINN: Wait! (quietly) Come back.

                 (Cuts to MARCELINE at home writing a song to ICE KING)

MARCELINE: (to the tune of Remember You) SIMON, AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO REMEMBERS WHO YOU WERE? I KNOW THAT IN YOUR HEAD IT MUST BE JUST A BLUR. AND YOU KNEW THAT I NEEDED TO BE WITH YOU. YOU FORGOT YOURSELF AND YOU FORGOT WHO I WAS, TOO. THE MAGIC KEPT YOU ALIVE, BUT IT MADE YOU CRAZY. AND I NEED TO SAVE YOU, BECAUSE YOU SAVED ME. I FORGIVE YOU, I’M NOT ANGRY, THAT YOU DON’T REMEMBER ME.

                 SIMON, THERE IS SO MUCH THAT YOU DON’T KNOW. YOU KNOW, THERE’S MORE TO LIFE THAN ICE AND SNOW. AND I REMEMBER THAT TIME AFTER THE WAR. WHY CAN’T YOU REMEMBER ME ANYMORE? THAT MAGIC KEPT YOU ALIVE, BUT IT MADE YOU CRAZY. AND I NEED TO SAVE YOU, BECAUSE YOU SAVED ME. I FORGIVE YOU, I’M NOT ANGRY, THAT YOU DON’T REMEMBER ME.

